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Anja's avatar

Wow! That was quite a start. I love how much you background information you gave effortlessly in a single scene. The dialogue served well. Very engaging introduction to the world of your story. Love the foreshadowing, the mystery and some insight into the character of the queen. Fascinating!

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OOOOOH STORY???? Really nice job twas a very entertaining read :D

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